Monday, 9 May 2016

MOTHERS

Hello,
I have absolutely ZERO idea of how to blog but oh well, practice makes perfect. In the meanwhile I am going to ask you to forgive me for any mistake I know I will make.

Yesterday was mother's day and I spent my hard earned Rs. 150 to give my mother a lovely tea, and a poem. I didn't think the poem was good, I mean by the way my mother reacted and put it up in Facebook you would think that it was better than Keats. However I don't think that my mother's judgement is unbiased so judge it for yourself.

This is after all the blog of a 'Wannabe Writer'.

                       

                       Mother

            Better than sweet heather
             is my dear own mother.
            For when I have a bother
            with a pat on my back
             she tells me what I lack
               with a bright smile
              that can be seen from a mile.
         
              People say that you can't see God,
              well, I call them a fraud.
              Every single blessed day
              [and without any pay]
             Do I see a celestial being
             [Now please no envying ]

            So, Mamma daarling
             just give me a ring.
             I'll get you anything.
             For I very well know
             that you do I awfully owe
            more than the world can offer.
        
          So, call me a duffer
          and make me suffer
           If I don't tell you-
          I LOVE YOU!


 Well, that is it. I do hope you liked it.
 
  'There when you were born,
  there from the very start
  when you pulled a cart.
  With patience did she bear
  Everything she had to hear. 
 With you when you cry
  and even when your eyes are dry.
 Very well do you know
 That she will never leave you
   So not very well do we treat 
 just a bit better than boys in the street.
 But she does have a day
  when she just has to say
 her wish, our command.'

There, now that I think was a spot better. You know I wonder whether anyone will read this. The blog with the poetical musings of a 13 year old.

Guess who gave me the idea to start this. My God Mother. That was what I thoroughly used to believe that my Mother was when I was small. I remember my music sir asking us to talk about our Mother. Everyone started shouting " She cooks for me." "She ties my hair" "She helps me" and so on. I also remember saying "She is my Fairy God Mother" dead silence after that. Then slowly the kids started to laugh and the Sir "Who said that ?". When I lift my hand he tells me, voice full of pity for this deluded child, " Child, your mother cooks, ties your hair, helps and so on. She is not a Fairy."  I remember feeling crushed, dejected and embarassed.  So know I keep it a secret, or kept it, that I think of her as a fairy when I am not angry with her.

You know what the saddest thing is? Our mothers do so much. Yet we shout at them, call them lazy, get angry and so on. I think they deserve medals in the form of our respect and love.

I have to stop. The battery of my laptop is negligible. So adieu, ciao and bye.

Wannabe Writer Super Susan.


  

10 comments:

  1. Woah!!!well done....looking forward for much more

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  2. Well done Susan! You have a great mom and you certainly are a loving daughter. Keep blogging.
    Love
    Reena Paul

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  3. Gr8 poems tooπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜˜

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  4. Super Susan keep blogging 'cause I love reading these

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  5. Super Susan keep blogging 'cause I love reading these

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