Hello,
I have absolutely ZERO idea of how to blog but oh well, practice makes perfect. In the meanwhile I am going to ask you to forgive me for any mistake I know I will make.
Yesterday was mother's day and I spent my hard earned Rs. 150 to give my mother a lovely tea, and a poem. I didn't think the poem was good, I mean by the way my mother reacted and put it up in Facebook you would think that it was better than Keats. However I don't think that my mother's judgement is unbiased so judge it for yourself.
This is after all the blog of a 'Wannabe Writer'.
I have absolutely ZERO idea of how to blog but oh well, practice makes perfect. In the meanwhile I am going to ask you to forgive me for any mistake I know I will make.
Yesterday was mother's day and I spent my hard earned Rs. 150 to give my mother a lovely tea, and a poem. I didn't think the poem was good, I mean by the way my mother reacted and put it up in Facebook you would think that it was better than Keats. However I don't think that my mother's judgement is unbiased so judge it for yourself.
This is after all the blog of a 'Wannabe Writer'.
Mother
Better than sweet heather
is my dear own mother.
For when I have a bother
with a pat on my back
she tells me what I lack
with a bright smile
that can be seen from a mile.
People say that you can't see God,
well, I call them a fraud.
Every single blessed day
[and without any pay]
Do I see a celestial being
[Now please no envying ]
So, Mamma daarling
just give me a ring.
I'll get you anything.
For I very well know
that you do I awfully owe
more than the world can offer.
So, call me a duffer
and make me suffer
If I don't tell you-
I LOVE YOU!
Well, that is it. I do hope you liked it.
'There when you were born,
there from the very start
when you pulled a cart.
With patience did she bear
Everything she had to hear.
With you when you cry
and even when your eyes are dry.
Very well do you know
That she will never leave you
So not very well do we treat
just a bit better than boys in the street.
But she does have a day
when she just has to say
her wish, our command.'
There, now that I think was a spot better. You know I wonder whether anyone will read this. The blog with the poetical musings of a 13 year old.
Guess who gave me the idea to start this. My God Mother. That was what I thoroughly used to believe that my Mother was when I was small. I remember my music sir asking us to talk about our Mother. Everyone started shouting " She cooks for me." "She ties my hair" "She helps me" and so on. I also remember saying "She is my Fairy God Mother" dead silence after that. Then slowly the kids started to laugh and the Sir "Who said that ?". When I lift my hand he tells me, voice full of pity for this deluded child, " Child, your mother cooks, ties your hair, helps and so on. She is not a Fairy." I remember feeling crushed, dejected and embarassed. So know I keep it a secret, or kept it, that I think of her as a fairy when I am not angry with her.
You know what the saddest thing is? Our mothers do so much. Yet we shout at them, call them lazy, get angry and so on. I think they deserve medals in the form of our respect and love.
I have to stop. The battery of my laptop is negligible. So adieu, ciao and bye.
Wannabe Writer Super Susan.
Good luck Super Susan
ReplyDeleteHi Helen, it's me Minnu
DeleteHi Helen, it's me Minnu
DeleteWoah!!!well done....looking forward for much more
ReplyDeleteIt's me Magical Minnu
ReplyDeleteWell done Susan! You have a great mom and you certainly are a loving daughter. Keep blogging.
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Reena Paul
Amazing idea
ReplyDeleteGr8 poems tooππππ
ReplyDeleteSuper Susan keep blogging 'cause I love reading these
ReplyDeleteSuper Susan keep blogging 'cause I love reading these
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